Tuesday, 12 January 2016

First cut feedback



A large number of the people we showed our first cut to said that the narrative was unclear and that the blinking was used too much. They suggested that our hand written titles were changed to just text as the mixture of the paper with writing on and the titles that were added in editing did not match and should be all of one or the other. Many people liked our idents so they will not need to be changed.

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